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[翻译] She Walks In Beauty

She Walks In Beauty

乔治-马丁的《热夜之梦》中曾引用过拜伦这首诗的第一段,描述潜藏在黑暗中的异族。
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* h( C% _5 D1 XShe walks in beauty, like the night 2 n  @! [7 B9 Y! Z7 k* Y
Of cloudless climes and starry skies;
5 D$ ^  M7 v& L+ qAnd all that's best of dark and bright   v$ D7 ?' z/ N- C4 b+ Z
Meet in her aspect and her eyes:
4 W/ q4 F- \8 H9 aThus mellowed to that tender light
( ]4 g0 `& `) rWhich heaven to gaudy day denies.
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  I8 A7 Y# l( ^8 V8 x她以绝美之姿行来,犹若黑夜 # P4 K8 R# P$ j/ p" p9 c+ z
晴空无云,繁星灿烂 + ^6 h) Q" r" }2 @2 G7 n, K  a
那最绝妙的光明与黑暗
$ X- H% r) g3 D+ m6 a3 _均汇聚于其丰姿与双眸 & h3 l3 I5 b" J& i) p6 T9 Y( ^
交织成如许温柔光辉 1 e: r+ E# d& `6 d. g
是浓艳的白昼所无缘得见
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  N& A3 u, e5 m: K9 ?  W4 DOne shade the more, one ray the less,   Y# p" s7 w8 R( d
Had half impaired the nameless grace
7 G/ W6 v" s5 P9 ~6 J2 S! gWhich waves in every raven tress, ' S) W/ T# ?: l, K& X# [% o+ A4 ?
Or softly lightens o'er her face;
; f; V3 H* ?2 Q' p3 U) {8 oWhere thoughts serenely sweet express / F$ i+ N6 S$ V- b
How pure, how dear their dwelling-place. 9 a7 j4 F' p# @" i! F
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多一分阴影,少一丝明亮. V) M3 Q2 `( H- o
都将损害这不可言说的美
& t( h: T- P, Q0 B摇曳在鸦翼般漆黑的发丝+ M; B0 e$ [, s
或燃于脸颊上的淡淡光晕7 F& s& E5 v9 H3 r+ C8 M2 C9 I
传递出娴静甜美的思绪
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4 |3 x' N3 C& _- [And on that cheek, and o'er that brow,
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The smiles that win, the tints that glow, 0 L" p, X5 M* g. q
But tell of days in goodness spent,
; K, l0 j+ P9 b% W3 eA mind at peace with all below, ; S9 s  o1 b9 E: D* U
A heart whose love is innocent! ) F& `2 c+ U3 A
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在那脸颊之上,眉宇之间' |" U& v- f2 i: Y( L+ [
柔和,平淡,却又生动3 f5 r  _9 ]/ U) j0 i
摄人的微笑,跳动的色彩2 F& A2 K. u/ I7 i" W2 _) X' y6 ~# V
倾诉着她良善的生命
; T, n! G/ S% U$ h思想,安于世间一切
2 M3 L! y- @7 ]* T* t心灵,满是无邪的爱
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  • Lala 威望 +5 2007-8-4 15:08
人的一生,正是一次看不到尽头的奥德赛

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