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建议把英文原文对照着发出来.这样才能看到翻译问题嘛.

Gina. and Tor began to fold up her wings, joint by foot-long joint. As each strut unlocked and folded back on the next segment, the tissue fabric between them went limp. When all the extensors were pulled in, the wings hung in two loose folds of drooping metal from the central axis strapped to Maris' back.
3 f- R, E' e& P0 q+ C+ n: x/ X! p上面这一段是全文的关键语段个人感觉自己翻的不好由其是几个关键词（加黑的）所以求大家来帮助下