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这个上次翻译过,标准译名为“神力钥匙”: R9 M; {( U" l7 t
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“spells that call upon an elemental creature actually create one from the elements of the plane where the spell is cast.
4 b% h4 I+ E3 z+ }9 @, J法术呼唤一个元素生物实际上是从法术所呼唤的该元素所在的位面创造一个”
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太迷糊了,建议这样,
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首先,元素与生成它的位面缔结盟约”
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“Finally, the chance for an elemental to break the caster's control over it increases by 5% for every plane between the monster's and the caster's (as determined by faction plane of influence)
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8 y% l) I% j3 r* H' u9 y0 w& ]) P”最后,元素与其施术者之间每间隔一个位面,它打破召唤者支配的几率增加5%(括号里面看不懂)“
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+ r9 j, j7 F& [ S1 o( i”When a petitioner dies on the Outer Planes, he or she's gone for good.
+ m- b7 _ O; G( U6 Z+ y当一个祁并者在主物质位面死亡,他或她回归原来的所在。“& p- [: R' Y N; `
这段错译:
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如同《图表II:位面对学派的改变》所记录的”
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